The first one is way too bright/sharp, edgy.
Second one is improved. Adding a stronger resistor acts the same as a treble control.
You can't make this kind of a dramatic, obvious change using cables. Not close.
God job! Well worth the effort.
Another Practical Use for YouTube
I came across an older version of Tin Pan Alley that I had made and for those who say YouTube is BS, it certainly serves well here to hear differences.
Especially listen on the first cut at at ~2:13 and you can hear a very pronounced resonance. Is it the room, or the speakers, or just the speakers exciting the room?
Doesn't matter because I was able to address it through minor changes to the crossovers and you will note that this resonance is pretty much gone and everything is more articulate in the second take. Thus, I know that my modifications are going in the right direction.
Of course this also demonstrates another of my theories. Changing the value of a $3 resistor can have a greater impact on the sound than changing out cables/components.
If you can't hear the difference, you need to change something.