Ads:minimum, lush, full disclosure? your style?


In phrasing for sale ads, a wide variety of styles and forms are used.
Some ads have minimal 'ZEN' like forms, just the bare minimum of facts needed to get the message across, and a sale.
Some sellers have extensive ads, with the wording as if from a company pamphlet,
Some ads give the personal details of the owners experience, the age and former use of the item.
As BOTH a seller, and as a buyer: What kind of ads do YOU like?
I post this because the problem of disclosure: Do we (as fellow hobbyists) need to tell the full tale of the product? Or, are we like any marketplace, where the motto has always been: "let the buyer be wary" (not 'beware" as sometimes written) Meaning anything not straight up illegal is OK?
i would wish for, and hope fellow AudiogoNers, both buyers and sellers can become more informed and make better decisions in posting and reading "For sale" ads.
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My take on some issues: Zen like posts: please, at least tell WHAT it is in the header! Ads selling: Ozoul GZX 4503 do not inform, they just annoy. Some folks don't even tell what it is in the body of the ad. (though, on the other hand, if you ONLY want to sell to someone already looking for this item, it IS the way to go.
Long 'pamphlet' ad are nice, they tell you the seller is trying, and give a lot of info. But may tell nothing of the personal history of the product.
The ads wherein the seller is omitting key facts known to the seller, because, after all, it is a: "Buyer be Wary" world. i wish this folks woulf come around to realize this is a hobby and should not just be a business. (though for some sellers it may be exactly that a business.. i wish buyers could note the difference!
And then the purpose of my post: to ask sellers for full disclosure: a new friendly standard to sell in a hobbyist friendly place: Teling if you are the second or third owner, the AGE of the product, what you actually paid, any difficulties you had with it, (even that you found it in a dumpster!) any triumphs. kind of as if you were selling it to a close friend. Which, we all could be.
So, what do you want in an ad as a buyer, or do as a seller?
elizabeth

Showing 2 responses by kurt_tank

So Elizabeth, as an example, would you consider this ad to be adequate for your needs?

(FYI, I have no clue who the seller of this cartridge is, nor am I the buyer.)

You mean an ad such as this one, correct?

I think this is exactly the type of ad you are requesting.
It clearly states what is for sale in the title.
It clearly states that the seller is the second owner, and even goes as far as to tell you how he obtained it, and when.
And, he even tells you how many hours he put on the cartridge, and how many the previous owner's widow believes her husband put on it.
It also shows the asking price as well as the retail price.
The seller clearly states that it is in 8 of 10 condition, (which probably means that while the visible part of the cartridge is in perfect condition, there may be some small imperfections around the mounting holes or perhaps some small marks on the bottom of the cartridge itself.)

So Elizabeth, what say you?

:-)
Elizabeth,

I agree with you on some of your post.
It is a good idea to clearly identify what one is selling, and to give specifics such as the retail price, the age of the product, the estimated number of hours on the product, and the general condition of the product. Pictures should be taken too, (although in the case of cartridges, most of us do not have the camera equipment necessary to show a stylus in that kind of detail. Samhar, what are you smoking? Pass it this way, dude!) ;-)

Oh and by the way, I COMPLETELY disagree with you that telling people what you paid for the item is necessary.
It most certainly is not. If I got a good deal, (or if I got royally screwed), when I first bought said item, this has absolutely no bearing on the price I am asking for it now.

Now, on to the Audio Asylum thread:

Much like Has2be, I disagree with your viewpoint too.
I find that Gopher's ad is quite adequate for an individual selling a secondhand cartridge. I think he is more than within his rights to keep the money, and not refund the money on the cartridge. It certainly seems to me that the buyer was merely wanting to try the cartridge for nothing. (Try getting a dealer to lend you a cartridge and see how far that gets you!)

Please note that for most of us, this is a hobby and it is not our profession. We are not in this to make money, but to enjoy this as a hobby. The only reason we buy and sell is to try out different pieces of equipment to figure out what we like best.

(And I assume that the vast majority of us are not marketing people, and the fact that we may not write up the perfect ad copy, in your opinion, is really not that big a deal. If you don't like an ad, just don't respond to it. Simple, huh?)

My two cents worth anyway.